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In class during writing, we have been had free-writing time. I had fun when I wrote something like this.
In class during writing, we have been had free-writing time. I had fun when I wrote something like this.
This story is about a boy that saved his town in his own dimension. if you are wondering how he saved his town? Well there was a monster stomping on everyone and all the houses.
Once upon a time there was one boy who was called Cobby who lived in a different dimension.
He was all alone, until he met a llama and three more boys, he found them all crying when he met them
he saw that the three boys were fighting for something. One fine day they told Cobby that when they were
walking along the path they saw a BIG, GIANT, MONSTER stepping on every house. Then
Cobby said “I was prepared for this” and the guys said “what do you mean” “ follow me”replied Cobby.
So they ran into the house and they were impressed with what they saw. They grabbed swords, torch,
bow and Cobby grabbed one robot hand…….. They ran out of the house and the monster saw them.
the monster attacked them, they were like ninjas fighting one of the boy passed the bow to Cobby and
Cobby shot it in the eye.The big green eyed monster got bigger and Cody said “ guys are you feeling
something?” “I think every attack we make he gets bigger” so they run as fast as they could. But Cobby
went on the back of the giant and destroyed its power of the green light and the town was safe.
He was all alone, until he met a llama and three more boys, he found them all crying when he met them
he saw that the three boys were fighting for something. One fine day they told Cobby that when they were
walking along the path they saw a BIG, GIANT, MONSTER stepping on every house. Then
Cobby said “I was prepared for this” and the guys said “what do you mean” “ follow me”replied Cobby.
So they ran into the house and they were impressed with what they saw. They grabbed swords, torch,
bow and Cobby grabbed one robot hand…….. They ran out of the house and the monster saw them.
the monster attacked them, they were like ninjas fighting one of the boy passed the bow to Cobby and
Cobby shot it in the eye.The big green eyed monster got bigger and Cody said “ guys are you feeling
something?” “I think every attack we make he gets bigger” so they run as fast as they could. But Cobby
went on the back of the giant and destroyed its power of the green light and the town was safe.
I enjoyed writing and I hope you have a awesome day
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