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Thursday 26 March 2020

Narrative writing (Home-Learning)

Hi readers,

Today I'm posting my Narrative Writing.

Our Narrative writing is were we write and describe the video

Here is mine.



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2 comments:

  1. Miss D27 March 2020 at 08:49

    Good morning Khiel!
    Your writing keeps the reader engaged with action. You don't miss out any of the steps in the narrative from the movie and I can feel the suspense building as I read you story. :D

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  2. Mrs Cassidy10 April 2020 at 21:25

    WOW Khiel.I really enjoyed your story.I was able to put a picture in my head as I was reading.What a brave dino.I am so glad the the fox knitted the dino back together.I used to do knitting.The last thing I tried knitting was a scarf but it didn't work out as I used different size wool.
    Have you ever tried to knit anything?.I would love to hear from you.

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