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Tuesday 21 April 2020

Narrative 1 - Party Hope. (Home-Learning)



Hi readers,

Today I am posting my narrative planning.

For this task we had to read a short sentence and make a narrative planning.

Here is the work that I did.


Thank you fro reading my blog post, feel free to comment and have an awesome day.

6 comments:

  1. Well done for completing your narrative plan!
    This looks like a great structure for an interesting story. I think you have a lot of opportunity to use dialogue (talking between characters) Khiel and encourage you to do this when you start writing.

    Keep up the great learning,
    Miss D

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  2. I can't wait to read your story Khiel.I like the word chandelier.To me it's a fancier name than light.And I like that you've used an unusal name like Raven.
    Have a great week and take care.

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  3. Hello Khiel. I can't imagine the fear of being in a building in an earthquake and having a chandelier falling! I am looking forward to the full story and the conversations between people. A great start!

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  4. Hello Khiel.just thought I would have a look at your blog today to see how your story is going.Have a great weekend and take care.

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  5. Hello Khiel.I can't wait to see what other work you have been working on.
    Take care and keep safe.All the best.

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  6. Good evening Khiel.I was just checking your blog.I hope all is going well for you.Have a great week:).

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