I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nicely crafted description Khiel. It has adjectives and is describing the park in good detail. You have your introduction, details of what it looks like, what you can do there and special features all in separate paragraphs. I like your personal comment at the end too!
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Nicely crafted description Khiel. It has adjectives and is describing the park in good detail. You have your introduction, details of what it looks like, what you can do there and special features all in separate paragraphs. I like your personal comment at the end too!
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