In Room eight we have been using book creator to create a book. The story had to have a narrative that sets the scene. We also had to have a problem and a solution. Here is my book that I created.
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I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Well done Khiel on your story. There is a lot of extra detail, but you keep the pace of the story moving and keep it interesting to the reader. Great punctuation and creating a mood to your story. I love how there will be a sequel.... I also think the powers were fantastic...I would not mind them.
ReplyDeleteAwesome book Khiel I liked the detail and it wasn't just a short story it was like 6 pages and the background was cool and the pics were awesome.
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