Hi readers, to day we had to do a writing about a video about marshmallows you can watch it in the video on the bottom.
We had to make a writing about it with metaphor, simile, adjectives and vivid verbs. We had to make a story track about it here is mine.
Fantastic Khiel. You have written a quality piece of writing. It has all the language features we discussed and is very interesting to read. Ka Pai.
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