Hi viewers. This is a Summer Learning Journey activity. We had to make a poem about what we think would happend and what we will do when we arrive at the moon.
Tuesday, 17 December 2019
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Kia Ora Khiel,
ReplyDeleteI am Nadia, I am going to be commenting on your Summer Learning journey blog posts these school holidays!
What an attractive poster you have made, you have used your computer skills and made something that has really caught my eye. The images of the moon are really beautiful and the poem you have written is also very good. I really enjoyed reading it because the two lines at the start really drew my eyes to it and made me feel like I was right there in the moment. The ending was quite funny, I'm sure if I was on the moon, my throat would be sore too! What gave you the idea to include this in your poem?
Next time, I would suggest to maybe make the words bigger and centre them a wee bit. It would make it look more tidy and might draw more people to it.
Would you like to go to the moon someday?
I hope to see a reply from you!
I can't wait to read your next posts!
- Nadia :)