Hi readers,
Today I'm posting my Narrative Writing.
Our Narrative writing is were we write and describe the video
Here is mine.
Thank you for reading my blog post. Have an awesome day.
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, 26 March 2020
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Good morning Khiel!
ReplyDeleteYour writing keeps the reader engaged with action. You don't miss out any of the steps in the narrative from the movie and I can feel the suspense building as I read you story. :D
WOW Khiel.I really enjoyed your story.I was able to put a picture in my head as I was reading.What a brave dino.I am so glad the the fox knitted the dino back together.I used to do knitting.The last thing I tried knitting was a scarf but it didn't work out as I used different size wool.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever tried to knit anything?.I would love to hear from you.