Easttle Term 4

 Kumusta readers,

Today I am posting our easttle writing that we did on Tuesday. Easstle is a three paragraph writing. The writing has to be in present tense, we had to look at a picture and write about it. Our picture was a picture of a life guard in a public pool. We had to include all the Language features we learnt last term. We also had to make it descriptive and correct the spelling and grammar.

Here is my easstle writing with the picture we had to write about.

I can see the splashing water, I can hear the sound of people screaming while going down the slippery and joyful slide. There are people playing with a ball. Parents supervising their child, and some parents taking a swim with their child. There are people chatting with their friends and family. I look out for people who need help, people who are getting hurt and people who are running on the sides of the pool. People are playing and having fun, I can hear laughter. A guy dives off the diving board, “SPLASH” the water goes all over me. 

“Hey please walk, no running you might slip!” I warn a kid.

A guy slid down the slippery slide and landed into the refreshing water. There are 2 people playing breath holding games in the water, I did not really care because they look like they are having fun.

“Hey Mum look at me go on this diving board!” A kid yelled. “Mum, take a picture! Mum you're not looking. Ok 1, 2, 3 Go!”

“Ha I always see those types of kids when I am on duty.” I told myself. A floatie slowly swam away from the owner. I grab the floatie and give it back to the owner.

“Thank you young sir.” Said the man. 

I can smell food behind me. People behind me are eating, a kid blows a candle, they sing happy birthday. I go back to my seat and keep a lookout. A kid goes down the fast slide on his stomach, he lands on the water “SMACK” his face and stomach hits the water with force. He came out of the water and his face and stomach is a strawberry. It is redder than the color red. I feel kind of bad, that's because he came crying out with his face red. I go back on duty, and keep on a lookout for any dangerous activity that people are doing. I hear someone running behind me..

“Kid I already told you not to run, now you have slipped.”

What was your favourite part of the story?

Thank you for reading my blog post, I hope you enjoyed and have an awesome day!!!!!!! :D