Today we are showing you what we have been doing for the past 2 weeks. This Term we have been learning how to write a strong narrative, a strong narrative needs to be descriptive, believable and consistent.
Today we had to change our boring sentences into descriptive sentences.
Here is an example:
Anna touched the mirror.
Here is my descriptive sentence:
Anna touched the mirror, it vibrated, it rippled.
We have been writing a narrative about a girl called Anna.
Here is the picture we used.
Here is my story that I am still working on.
Is there anything that I could work on?
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